Hi its Lochie this week RM 25 have been writing a 100 word story, its harder than you think. We did this to practice our editing skills and how to keep the important words in.

Here is the story.

Jessy lives in an old wooden house the color of bluest sky with her parents and her brother Max but people just called him Wonka because he was so silly all the time. One dreadful night their house was broken into by a robber named, well Robert who could turn into a frog. Wonce Robert had gone the children snuck out of bed and grabbed a camera and chased after him. They ran along the road searching for Robert's car quickly, they took a picture of the car’s number plate so the police caught him and Robert went to jail.