Kia ora Lochie, I really like your blog post about the phantom menace. I agree with you that it has lots of detail, you have described the setting really well with the sandstone buildings. You might want to add a bit of what type of people like is it funny or serious. Blog ya later, Luka out.
Fakaalofa lahi atu Lochie, great to see you blogging again this term. Wow, you picked a complex movie to review! I liked how you introduced us to some key characters. Please note for next time: it is super important to not tell your readers how the movie (or story) ends. They will want to find that out for themselves. If you had to rate the movie out of 10, what would you give it?
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Kia ora Lochie, I really like your blog post about the phantom menace. I agree with you that it has lots of detail, you have described the setting really well with the sandstone buildings. You might want to add a bit of what type of people like is it funny or serious.
ReplyDeleteBlog ya later, Luka out.
Fakaalofa lahi atu Lochie, great to see you blogging again this term. Wow, you picked a complex movie to review! I liked how you introduced us to some key characters. Please note for next time: it is super important to not tell your readers how the movie (or story) ends. They will want to find that out for themselves.
ReplyDeleteIf you had to rate the movie out of 10, what would you give it?
Hello Lochlan, WOW! This is a great peace of writing I like the way you have added lots of detail. I have done some writing on my blog over the lock down as well maybe you could check it out
ReplyDeletehttps://odsjarvisf.blogspot.com/
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